2016-06(Jun)-29-Wed-0013 (entry 4/4)

iterative writing

The unspoken is always the true crux of the matter.

(Rewrite. I want it to be purely positive and constructive.)

I always speak the fundamental truth.

(Too arguable.)

Speak the fundamental truth.

(I like it, seems final.)

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